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PostSubject: Right Place, Wrong Time? (FF.net) Review Replies   Thu May 17, 2012 6:56 am

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HMK

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I loved meeting Phineas Black! I guess he wasn't headmaster by that point?
Loved the tensions between everyone. Also Alphard and Minerva are so sweet;
its sad to think that they don't ever go together.

Thank you so much for your review Smile Phineas Black is not the Phineas you are thinking of. Phineas Nigellus became headmaster. My Phineas came much later Wink I'm glad you enjoyed reading the tension, I'm always wanting to get it right. I love the idea of Alphard and Minerva together too! It would be nice to see Alphard work out a way to escape his family and be with Minerva. We will have to wait and see... Thanks again for reading! Smile


Eyrie

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Congratulations on your baby! Great chapter, I loved Tom/Hermione
interaction, can't wait for the kiss Very Happy I hope they figure the memory thing
out. Update soon !

Thank you for the baby congratulations Smile It's a very exciting time for us. I'm glad you enjoyed reading the chapter. Hehe, it is a lot of fun writing Tom and Hermione dialog... It is probably the best thing about this ship, except for the smut maybe (lol). Well, there will be more UST coming up (I won't give too much away!) and there will be something with her memory too.
Thanks again for reading Smile


dragonfly

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absolutely captivating !

more please

Thank you! that's very sweet of you XD more to come soon...


ouiplanete

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Wow. Just wow!

Thank you for reading and reviewing Smile



--- That's it for now folks! will hopefully get them all done by tomorrow XD

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PostSubject: Re: Right Place, Wrong Time? (FF.net) Review Replies   Fri May 18, 2012 10:35 am

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Nix

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Congratulations on your baby! Smile

Thank you, that's very sweet of you Smile


Nonymousse

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Hi, this is Nonymousse, but you can call me Nony. Well, well, well,
what can I say? I've been absolutely captivated by this story, and with your
other one, Tertius Vita, both were masterfully written, with wonderful plots
and amazing characters. I loved how well you've managed to portray Hermione,
and her "conflicts" with Tom. Ah, moving on to him. Tom, he's an incredibly
selfish, chauvinistic pig, and a self-righteous bastart to say the least, but
also incredibly hot. *argh!* Anyways, I really look forward to reading more,
you've kept me on the edge of my seat with this for sure, and congratulations
on the baby(?)!

Hi! thank you for reading and leaving such a nice review. I'm glad you're enjoying reading both of my stories! Well, I won't lie and say it's always easy writing these characters and the story lines, but it is really enjoyable! and satisfying when you can make the two work Wink Hahaha yep, Tom Riddle *drool* Anyway, I hope you enjoy ch12 too. And thank you for the congratulations on the baby... hehe, I assume the question mark is some kind of confusion? Anyway, thanks again!


gleeislove

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Thank you so much for posting a new chapter of this, i've been
missing your writing. Although I love your other story and I hope your muse
cooperates with you on that soon, I have to admit that this story is my
favorite. I've always had a soft spot for timeturners but you've created such
an unique twist with characters staying in character.

I really enjoyed this chapter, and although I liked all of the interactions
the Tom/Hermione ones were the kind I was looking forward to the most. I'm so
excited to see what happens on from here with Tom no longer pretending and
Hermione knowing he's focusing on her secrets intently.

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So I just finished rereading this for the fourth time, and I have
to say with every rereading I fall more in love. There are so many things I
truly favor about this story, from the characters characterizations to the
plot itself. I understand you've just recently had a baby so you have much
more important and time consuming things to worry about, but I would be so
grateful to see more of this story (and/or your other one.) Regardless of when
you update I hope everything is going well.

Hi, thank you so much for your lovely reviews! Smile
Well, I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the characters. I must admit that the time travel story is very difficult to write because of the many directions you are able to chose from! Having read many time travel stories myself, I know that many writers have their own theories and it's quite an opinionated subject Smile
As for characterisation, well, writing a fan fiction, I am really trying to avoid making them OOC. The Tomione section is so disappointing (and well known) because Tom is often so OOC.
Yes, I am pretty busy with my new baby, but we're lucky she's a good baby and I do get the opportunity to write Smile
Thanks again for all of your nice words and please stay tuned!

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PostSubject: Re: Right Place, Wrong Time? (FF.net) Review Replies   Mon Oct 01, 2012 8:27 am

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anon wrote:
Wonderful chapter! Thank you for the update...

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and reviewing Smile


Eyrie wrote:
Oh, their first kiss.. I loved the scene where he used the spell on her.
If I stumble across something similar in other fanfics, it's almost always my
favourite scene, because then he is equal with her(he knows the future).
Update soon Smile

Hello, thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed reading that scene. Yeah, it's always an exciting time when Tom finds out where Hermione is really from - no matter the circumstances. As for knowing the future, not so fast Wink But you'll find out next chapter. Thanks again for reading and leaving a review.


Katelynn wrote:
This deserves more reviews! Absolutely amazing writing! You put so
much plot into your story, and your writing style is excellent. The characters
are so well written with such emotion and complexity.

I applaud you on your wonderful piece of fanfiction and cannot wait to read
more!

Keep it up! Wink

Wow, thank you for such a lovely and thoughtful review. You are too kind, really. Haha, I put a fair bit of plot in because I often have several different directions to chose from. So that's kind of purposeful. As for the characters... well I have a terrible habit of getting too into the stories of my side characters. But at the same time, I have a lot of fun doing it. I'm glad you enjoyed those aspects though.

Thanks again for such a nice review. I hope you enjoy the update when it's posted!


cathrine howard wrote:
I absolutely love this story. Fantastic job. But I think
Hermione needs to be a bit more strong. Please update soon

Hi, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. As for Hermione, well, I guess it's all open to interpretation and situation. I hope you like her in the next chapter. Thanks again for reviewing and I appreciate your feedback Smile


anon wrote:
Best fanfic ever!

Wow, thank you very much Smile


Molly wrote:
Gahh update soon! That was fantastic!

Hi, thank you for reading and reviewing. So glad you enjoyed the update and ch13 has taken a while, but I got there in the end Smile


Shanna wrote:
Dear god that was one of the most engaging and amazing stories I
have EVER read.. I couldn't stop reading! Its so sexy and thrilling. Taking so
long to have it finally all come to a head made it so delicious! Your scenes
between the two characters are enchanting and I'm devouring and loving every
word and sentence! Please update soon, I can't wait for more! Ps you kept me
up until 6am haha no idea how ill sleep now.

Wow! Thank you, your review made my day when I received it! I'm so glad you enjoyed the read. Haha, well, I always like a build up in a Tomione story, otherwise it's just unrealistic, in my opinion. I'm glad you're enjoying their interactions as well. I hope that the interactions get even more exciting from here on. 6am?! Well, I'm very flattered! I know I've stayed up reading fan fics all night too, lol. Thanks again for your lovely review Smile


Lolita wrote:
Aah! It's been far too long. That chapter was so worth the wait.

I hadn't realized you were having a baby, aw. Congratulations, madame!

Hi, thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the baby congratulations, that's very sweet. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!


Guest wrote:
loved d term human house elves...Indian aren't ya?...de taali me too...a

Hi, Nope, not Indian, Australian actually Smile I just like to read a lot. Thanks for leaving a review and glad you liked it!


Guest wrote:
Wow! The other side of Tom! Love it! Plus more info on the weird woman.
Looking forward to updates!

Hi, thanks for reading and reviewing! Ah yes, he can't keep his act up forever. What a pity Hermione already knows him well enough. And yes, more to come on the "weird woman" Wink Glad you're enjoying the story!


Guest wrote:
this story is amazing! i love it! please update soon.

Thank you so much for such a lovely review! Hopefully the new update will be up very soon Smile


Guest wrote:
I just started this story yesterday and finished it right now! Please update
soon! It is really good and i can't wait to see what happens next!

Hi, thank you for such a lovely review! I hope to update very, very soon. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it Smile


Blueberry wrote:
This is a great story. I've started reading it a couple of days ago
and now I'm depressed because I've realised it was months since the last
update. Please update soon!

Hi, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story! Don't worry, an update will be very, very soon. Thank you again for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy ch13 when you read it.


pastel de zanaho wrote:
please, please, update soon

An update is not far away! Thanks for reviewing Smile



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