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PostSubject: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Tue Aug 28, 2012 1:43 am

This is where I'll leave the review replies to the anonymous reviews on "Prisms of Darkness."

If you have any questions or objections to anything I say here, please feel free to post a reply.

Review replies by chapters:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Thu Jan 08, 2015 1:06 pm

Chapter 9

Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
what is AFF?

AFF stands for the website, Adultfanfiction.net. Please take note that the first time you click on a link leading to that site, you'll be taken to an age verification webpage where it will be your responsibility to answer truthfully. If you are under the legal age of your country, please refrain from clicking on the link.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to jessica henry

jessica henry wrote:
update soon Smile

I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
Please continue this! The plot is amazing and the suspense in the last chapter was really strong. Please?

Sorry for the long wait! I was spending more time on "Somewhere in Time" since I wanted to finish one of my ongoing fics (the list was getting too long), which was why I haven't updated on this one. The next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for the compliments, reading, and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Fri Jan 23, 2015 11:45 am

Chapter 10

Review reply to peacock33

peacock33 wrote:
So excited to see an update. I wonder what is going to happen with Hermione now! She was definitely pushed to her last limit so it will be interesting to see if she'll be able to kill or get revenge on the Dark Lord.

Hope you enjoyed the chapter!

Hm, daring suggestion there, peacock, very daring. The Dark Lord will not be very pleased about people plotting for or supporting plans for his death. Or for that matter, any mentions of revenge against his mighty persona. May Serp suggest for you to hide in a heavily warded bunker like she is currently doing now, too? (Yes, Serp knows that the Dark Lord may not be very pleased with what Serp has in mind, so she is now in hiding, too.)

And talking in third person is completely normal after writing too much from the Dark Lord's perspective, I assure you. Wink

Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
Wow! Great & surprising ending!

Thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!




Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
You came back!

Well, I never quite left - I doubt the Dark Lord would be very pleased if I left the ship for good. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Wed Feb 25, 2015 8:32 am

Chapter 10

Review reply to Lola

Lola wrote:
Amazing! can't wait to read more I was so excited when I realised you'd begun another story. Looking forward to the next update!

Thanks for the compliment! I hope you'll enjoy future chapters of this story, too. XD

I don't think Tomione fans can really escape the Tomione abyss once they fall into it. Wink

Thanks for the compliments again, and thanks for reading and reviewing!




Review reply to Swiftielove

Swiftielove wrote:
Okay, good chapter. I'm wondering whether Hermione's end goal is to be free, or for others to be free.

Thanks for the compliment! Well, I don't want to give a lot away, but as of right now, I can only say that Hermione's going through some trouble of her own, so she needs the time away from things. Smile

Quote :
Why isn't Voldemort putting up more of a defense?

Because ... he's a total arse who thinks that he has everything under control.

The Dark Lord: Serp, what is this I read?

Serp: My Lord, erm ... it wa-wasn't me typing it was RoAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

*many hours later*

Quote :
IMPATIENTLY AWAITING THE NEXT CHAPTER

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope you find future chapters to your liking as well!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
Awesome work! I can always count on you for awesome fics.Smile

Aww, thanks for the compliment! blush  I hope you'll find future chapters enjoyable, too!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to voorpret

voorpret wrote:
That was a fantastic chapter! Wow!

Thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Fri Feb 27, 2015 3:43 am

Chapter 11

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Guest wrote:
Wow! That was an amazing chapter! I loved the time skip, and very cool that they moved to Hong Kong. I'm glad Hermione successfully restored her parents' memories. You've left me intrigued about what will happen next with Lucius...

I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the chapter! Yeah, I figured Hermione needs to move as far away as she could to a place where things aren't exactly under Voldemort's control and where he would least expect her to be, and from the "insider's info" she has, Hong Kong is still free from his clutches, so Hong Kong it is. XDDD

I have to admit that I was glad that she found her parents, too. She really does deserve a bit of happiness after all the toil I've thrown her through, eh? hiding behind the so

Hopefully, you'll find future chapters enjoyable, too, and thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Sat Mar 28, 2015 9:30 am

Chapter 12

Review reply to lena

lena wrote:
I love your work and thank you for updating...

Thanks! I'm glad to hear that you enjoy the story so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
Update soon please!

I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Mary

Mary wrote:
Thank you for the update! Loved it!

Glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter!

Quote :
5 years...that's a long time. And Tommy didn't pay Hermione a visit? Not even once? Wow, what a self-restraint Smile Anyway, can't wait for the new chapter, and some lemons maybe)

Haha, yep, five years. Very Happy And nope, no visit, though it's not like he didn't try hiding behind the so . I don't want to give too much away, since there should be a Voldemort POV soon. Hopefully, you'll find future chapters enjoyable, too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to lena

lena wrote:
I love Somewhere In Time and now this (_). Please keep on writing, you're a wonderful writer.

Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying my stories so far. Smile I hope that you'll like my future works, too. Smile Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Regina Winter

Regina Winter wrote:
I really like this story and hope you update soon. I just want to point out Hermione is about 29 years old or about 30 depending on how long Bellatrix kept her in the second chapter. Just a little observation. Smile

Thanks! I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far Smile. Oh! That's a cool observation. *is ashamed that she'd never taken note of that before*

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope you'll enjoy future chapters, too!



Review reply to VieVienna

VieVienna wrote:
I love this Fanfic! The mystery surrounding Voldemort and Hermione is so exciting. Please update soon!

Thanks! I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far. The future chapters are still in the works; progress depends on how much free time I get though. Though the old version got deleted by stupid me and my stupid fingers, a new version is up. Very Happy

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Sun Nov 08, 2015 12:34 pm

Chapter 1

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Guest wrote:
Just wondering, will this be a re-write, or are you just re-posting? Will we see any new chapters? Wink

Nope, this won't be a rewrite. I'm just doing some editing as I go along ... well, except for the first chapter so far because I wanted to reassure everyone that I didn't just delete the story forever or something. When real life permits it, I will go back and do some small edits on the first chapter as well. I did a rewrite for "Somewhere in Time" and, boy, did that tire me out. So ... not doing it again unless I have a really good reason. Anyway, enough of my babbling.

TL;DR I will only be doing minor edits (spelling, grammar, missing words, etc.) and yes, there will be new chapters added when I get all the old chapters back on. Very Happy

Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
Amazing!

Thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
oh my god this is glorious

Thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:54 am

Chapter 2

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Guest wrote:
Awesome!

Thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
Update soon!

I'll try to update as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Review reply to Guest

Guest wrote:
soooooo uh. i have to say i wasn't expecting this (much creepier tbh. bella *scares* me) twist
i'm SO looking forward to the rest

lol! Yeah, Bella can be rather crazy.

Glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far, and I hope you find future chapters enjoyable as well!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:40 am

Chapter 3

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Guest wrote:
Great chapter, Update soon!

I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for the compliment, reading, and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Prisms of Darkness (FF.net version) Review replies   Sun Feb 07, 2016 4:08 am

Chapter 4

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Guest wrote:
This is good. Please continue!

Thanks for the compliment! I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



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Guest wrote:
Update soon!

I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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