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PostSubject: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:13 pm

Belladonna:

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Yay, Loki!
I wonder who Ginny was talking to when Hermione was waking up at the end...
Also curious about the name "Lokasenna," hmm.

That was a pleasure to read!

Oh, Ginny was just talking to Hermione, to keep her company. You know, like some people do when someone they love are in a coma? So I was just aiming for that!

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:ohh, I've got the name reference now! very clever, as usual Smile

Ah, yes, Lokasenna is the name of one of the old songs in the Norse canon where is Loki going off and insulting all the other gods... I just thought it was funny to use as a name, because I used Loki earlier ^^

I'm glad you liked the story so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Loved it!

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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i love it your awesome

Aw, you are flattering me! Glad you liked the story so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Fri Apr 26, 2013 5:50 am

Belladonna:

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Wow. This is a very refreshing story. Please update soon!

I'm glad you like the story, but as it says on the story, it's completed. It's just a one-short. Thus, it won't be updated. But thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Could do with a second chapter?

I'm sorry that you feel that way, but for me, it's completed. I hoped you liked it either way! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Switched:

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Fantastic!
Thank you! We are glad you liked it Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Sun Jul 28, 2013 7:41 am

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serpentslions:
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Ive read your story twice and decided that I should review. It
was a very unique plot you have written and the characterization is spot on!

Yay! Thank you, I'm glad that you did Smile It's always nice when someone tells you they like what you have done Smile I had a lot of fun writing this fic, and just going wild with everything XD So thank you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Dmitri AFF

michelle:

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Hey! Love ALL of your stories so far!!!! Dynamics b/w H and LV really work!!!! Keep up the great writing!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay! Thank you! And well, I've written a lot of new stories after Dmitri, so I hope you have found your way to them and are liking them as well! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

A Lovely Enemy

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Wow! I can't explain why i love this pairing but i just do! job well
done by the way, it was impeccably written and i thoroughly enjoyed it! I
guess i wished for a little more from the epilogue but who wouldn't from a
fantastic fic like this?

Haha, yes, had a period there when I loved Ginny/Voldemort as well.. but that have moved over to Hermione/Voldemort XD Oh well! I'm glad you liked this story... and... eh... I don't remember the epilogue anymore *hides* sorry, it has been so long since I wrote this story! But yeah... who doesn't want more and more to read of a story they like Wink
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Sat Feb 01, 2014 6:06 pm

AFF, Atlantis

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   So I found you by reading shared flame. I read it about halfway through then I gave up on it for a bit. Then randomly picked back up on it. I finished it, then read every one of your other stories. I have to say I love how you give LV and HG different personalities in each story. But also this has been my favorite one so far.

Yeah, SF is really long, and I took quite a long time to post chapters halfway through, so it was probably good to take a break from it there ;)But glad you picked it up again and enjoyed it!
Atlantis is one of my favourite stories as well (despite the errors... ah, well), so I'm always happy when other people like that one the best Very Happy
I wish I could say that I intentionally make their personalities vary, but sadly, they just go where the story takes them. I guess it has to do with how our experience shape us? Anyway, I'm glad you like the variation :DThanks for reading and reviewing!


Linber93:

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Just finished with your story! It is one of the better V/H I have had the pleasure of reading. So original, fun and twisted. But most, I enjoyed the fact that Voldemort didn’t turn out to be “nice” even though he clearly changed! Now, I’ll go to your page and search for more good stories to read!

Yay! I'm glad you liked it so much Very Happy I try to be as twisted as possible in both the plot and... eh, other areas when I write Wink And yeees, I don't like stories where Voldemort run all "All I needed was lurve and smootches to be a good boy", but I think Hermione can... rub off on him to some extent Wink
I hope you found my other stories and enjoyed those as well! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Sat Feb 01, 2014 6:11 pm

FF.net Dmitri's Wedding

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wow, Dmitri growns up

Yup, kids have a tendency to do that, I've noticed XD Thanks for reading and reviewing!


FF.net The Contract

guest:
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can't wait to read the rest!

I hope you liked the rest of the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Guest:
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Lovely and wonderful story. I enjoyed it so much and I loved that it was
unique and different.

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you liked the Contract so much Smile I try to make up things I think is original, so it fun when people think they are! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

FF. net Ett Giftemål att dö för

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Underbart. Go Draco!

Haha, jag kommer inte ens ihåg vad Draco gjorde längre.... men glad att du gillade det! Tack för att du kommenterade och läste Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Sat May 03, 2014 2:33 pm

The Most Dangerous words in world are I do FF

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I just can't understand what exactlly everyone found great or even amazing. I have read a lot of fanfic stories with that pairing and it was trully amazing. With the characters stay in character or a very small change. Well your Snape is totaly stupid without and depth or even cunning or even the maturity for his age, Hermione ok what should I say about. She is seventeen for crying out loud! how it is possible to be so ignorant about sex or so childish? She is a bookworm but she knows about sex and she never acts like a five year old girl.
And what about bella and Hermione totaly the best friends?She almost kill her in the movies. Don't start about Voldermore totaly out of character. And an advice do not use a language that you do not know at all. I am Greek and I almost pull my hairs out when I try to understand this stupid little mojo you have wrote. Please next time try to put them in character and just manipulate the events for your advance. Than you very much and I appreciate your work but it doesn't seem you try a lot or that you have watch the movies or read the books.

I have to applaud your patience for managing to finish a story you hate so very much. I would never have been able to do it. I don't know why, but I have always preferred to read things that I really enjoy, or I can't be bothered with it. Oh well, maybe I'll get over that one day.

So sorry for butchering your native language. I understand that you wrote the review to clearly demonstrate how annoying it is to read a misspelled language like that. Very nice!

As to the OOC'ness of the character, you can't possibly think this was any worse than the movies :O Oh, the horrors of being worse than the movies. How ever will I get over this.

Thanks for reading and reviewing and hope you'll like my new work better!

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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Thu Oct 09, 2014 11:22 am

The Contract FF


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Chapter 22

ThatRandomBadger:WOOOOOOOOO GO HELGA!
WHAT DOES THAT SPELL?!
HUFFLEPUFF!


Chapter 24
ThatRandomBadger:F*** DUMBLEWHORE!



Chapter 28

ThatRandomBadger:KICK MAX IN THE BALLS
No los sentio (i cant spell nor do i fluently speak Spanish LOL)

Haha, I really like your reactions to the chapters ^^ It was just what I hoped for! The story has a lot of people to be mad about and a lot of people to cheer on, so yeah! Glad you seemed to have enjoyed the story, and I hope you enjoyed the rest of it!


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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Fri Jan 09, 2015 7:47 pm

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Angrypixels:

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Interesing ending

I hope that means you like it ^^

Guest:

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again i liked how you portrayed the characters(esp. evil tom) and saw them bantering with each other. will you consider to write more on this?

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed the portrayal of the characters, it is a lot of fun to write Tom properly evil ^^ It makes it more amusing in their bantering, indeed Wink But no, this story is finished and I don't plan to write anything more on it. But thanks for reading and reviewing!

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...what did I just read? There was so much wrong in this story...Hermione was oOC tbh and the pacing was too quick. And I was waiting for the real Hermione to emerge and take charge. However, Tom was described great.

I have no idea what you just read, but it can't possibly be my story, because I'm amazing ALL THE TIME Very Happy

Joking aside, well, this is an AU and the canon events that shaped Hermione didn't happen, so yeah, she is somewhat OOC, if you find that it's too much, then... well, not much to do. Glad you liked Tom, though!



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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Fri Jan 09, 2015 7:48 pm

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I never 4ead this one but it's just as good. Hm, three months locked in a room with voldemort haVing nothing but sex. I envy Hermione. And shes gonna marry him, that lucky witch. Can't wait to see more from u.

Yeah, this one is a bit of a hiding story for me, since I just posted it on AFF. But I'm glad you enjoyed it Wink Hermione sure did, once the sex started to happen, hehe. I hope you'll like my future stories as much! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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PostSubject: Re: Lady Miya's review responses (short and old stories)    Tue Mar 24, 2015 12:10 pm

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Please update this story,as it is really quite grasping and unbelievably interesting and I can't wait to read the concluding part.

Er... are you a troll? Otherwise, I suggest just pressing "next" since there are three more chapters already posted to read. They were all published at the same time. Glad you like the story, though.

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