Review reply Serpent of the World

From chapter 1


Konoha:

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Eeek I loved it! I'm so glad you're writing again. Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Yay, glad you liked it! And well, I've actually been writing on this for quite some time now, but I wanted to finish it completely before posting... I've started to write on other things now though ^^ Writing is awesome... I hope you like what I make of this... or at least find it entertaining! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Moi:

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Were they actually counting on a blood sister? And will Salazar manage to come back to the living at some point? If it's really Hermione Salazar will put his hopes on, they'll really have their work cut out for them in convincing Hermione. As it stands, neither Salazar, nor Tom have their reputations speak for their trustworthiness, current intentions aside.
While Salazar is considerably older than Hermione, they at least don't share a personal history like Tom of trying to get Hermione and her loved ones murdered and tortured. Once Tom (who is technically older in years lived than Salazar) gets his memories back, it'll only be even worse.
I wonder how Salazar got murdered and possibly also by whom.
Intriguing start!
Moi

Well, at this point in the story, Tom and Salazar is looking for a man, since the term is "blood brother", but there is nothing saying anything against a blood sister coming to play. And yeah, they do have their work cut our for them if they hope to get Hermione's help  Hermione is all to familiar with both their reputations!

But no, Salazar is not alive and won't become alive. He doesn't even really care about being alive. He is more like a protector of Hogwarts. And I'm sorry to say that I haven't written anything about how Salazar got murdered or by whom, it's simply not plot-relevant, sorry if I made it sound like that in the first chapter.

Either way, I hope you'll find the story enjoyable regardless! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



giada:

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I've read all your works so far, well, except the ones not in english xD and I loved every one of them.
From the first chapter I can already say that this new adventure is going to be wonderful!
Since between tom and hermione there will be a brother bond from what I understood, a difference from your other works, I'm curious to know between whom there will be romance...

Also.
I want to thank you for a lot of enjoyment from reading your  helped in rough moment of my  I really appreciate your work:)

Wow! Thank you! I'm glad I've been able to amuse you through all my stories. I know they are of various quality (not to mention spelling...) but I hope they'll become better and better!

Well, I personally think that this adventure is really fun, so I hope you'll too as it develops. It's particularity fun to write Tom and Hermione as something else than an intimate couple ^^ (And yeah, I don't think it's too much of a spoiler that they'll be blood siblings even though they don't know it themselves yet). There isn't much focus at all on romance in this story... but I guess you have figured out that I have a hard time writing a story without smut, so, yeah XD There are some different couples, though, so that's why I said in my A/N that there are no shippings in it. 

I'm so glad I could bring some enjoyment into your life during rough parts <3 Writing has helped me too when life gets horrid, so I completely understand the need to escape. I do hope, though, that your life is okay right now so this can just be an added bonus, but if you need some escape from reality, then please come and read!!!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Elizabeth:

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Could Tom, being vindictive, decide to make Harry his blood? You know so he knows that even he can't be fully rid of him. And when he starts to cast the spell it hits Teddy instead. And the Tom finds out that by casting that spell on a minor he has made Teddy his adopted son by blood. And Salazar tells him that since Teddy is to young that Tom has to get Teddy's godmother and cur



God mother and guardian Hermione to blood adopt Teddy and perform a regnant spell that let's her full in for Teddy until he is of age. I can see Tom being disgusted by having to have a child in anyway with a mud blood, at least at first. And I can't see Hermione being happy about this at first either. Especially when she finds out he was targeting her baby brother Harry. And yes I know Harry is the godfather, but I imagine that Hermione was also named godmother and between the two of them Hermione is better equipped right after the war to be a parent than Harry and I also think Hermione would be willing to live with Grandma Andy with Teddy and help Teddy have his great auntie Cissy and cousin Draco in his life than Harry. 

Also I am sorry about by last review. I got distracted and hit the wrong button. Please update soon.

Wow, that's the most thought through speculation I've got so far! Alas, this story isn't going in that direction at all, I'm afraid. I wrote a lot of babies in my last story, Shared Flame, so I didn't really feel like writing about children and babies in this one. So no babies, no ships, just as big snake wanting to eat everything!


Though, you should consider writing your own story, you seem to have a lot of ideas for a fic of your own!


Thanks for reading and reviewing and I plan to update this week, so hope to see you then!

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buttercup88:
    

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    love the new story cant wait for the next chapter.. please update soon..

Happy you like the new story! And now you won't have to wait for a new chapter any longer because I just updated! Hope you like it  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest

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I'm glad to read an update! Haha thanks.. Its such a great stress reliever from RL

And I'm happy to provide an update! As well as some stress reliving. Stress really sucks  I hope it's easier this week, otherwise, I hope to have a new chapter for you in the next couple of days to take your mind of it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Guest 2

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Awesome. Great ending!

Hihi, Yes, well, it was time to introduce Hermione to Salazar  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

lisa:

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loved it! poor hermione, always has to save the world!

Glad you liked it! And yeah, Hermione just can't catch a break. Poor dear... (Miya hides for angry Hermione in the chapters to come). Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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ziggyzig:

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great chapter, love it..

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Siverb:

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Nice and interesting, however I would love to see Hermione/Salazar relationship in longer story. I've read your older stories and I know that I won't be dissapointed if you create Granger with THE Slytherin. Looking forward to your next update.

Glad you are liking the story thus far! Alas, this won't be a Hermione/Salazar. I have never read a Hermione/Salazar and while I don't mind the idea in theory, it just doesn't excite me very much. So I'm afraid I can't promise that I'll write any fics in that pairing in the foreseeable future. You never know, though...

I'm pleased you have liked my other stories, though and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of this fic! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest 1:

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Oooh! Great work!

Glad you are liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest 2:

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In England Fall Autumn

Why did England fall (in, on, with?) autumn?! Was it because of this error in this fic? OH NO, I'M SO SORRY! I PROMISE NEVER TO DO IT AGAIN, PLEASE ENGLAND, DO NOT FALL!

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MrE-Quecky:

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yay, awesome story so far! I will keep checking for updates

Wih, glad you are liking it so much! I hope I won't keep you waiting for long! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Various chapters by some anon readers who seemed to have liked the story so much they felt more reviews were in order

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This is brilliant! Love your new story. ur so amazing i luv this! OMG! LOVE IT. YOU RULE! Love it, please update soon. its just greeeaaaaattt! This story should've WAY more reviews. It's magnificent! hahaha yess smut is coming! Update soon! sooo good! Love the start of this story, eager for more. ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER! I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO LIVE WITHOUT THIS!

Thank you for all the kind compliments, they are all completely true, of course, but it's nice that other people see it too!

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grammarian: england doesn't fall, it springs. England always falls for Autumn. Autumn is a beautiful woman with curves in all the right places. England doesn't fall, it rains (reigns)!

I think it's safe to say that England and Autumn have found each other. They are going to live happy together, in eternal spring, and reign together for all eternity!

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I love all your Tomiones, and this story is just as promising. Looking forward to seeing how you'll solve the no-shipping bit. I need my Miya smut.

You shall have your Miya-smut! As long as I live, there will always be Miya-smut!!! (Just not between Tom and Hermione and actually, it was pretty easy keeping those too apart!)

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why do you think its a good idea for ostriches to be at the north pole?

You have been misinformed. I don't want ostriches in the north pole. The Anti-Ostrich Organisation for Growing Hot Ostrich-free Statues and Towns (AOO GHOST) has spread those rumors about me so you won't take me seriously when I put forth my three-step-plan of creating a Ostrich-ruled territory in Minnesota.

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I'm really liking you, and you've got a marvellous beta. This story is the best I've ever seen.

I know, I have the best beta! Of course, this awesome story deserves the best

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this is a very good one. i like your idea of Tom/Luna. it adds extra humor XD

Yes, those two have been very amusing to write together! Though, I find Luna a bit hard to write, but it's good practice!

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No, we can't have Luna falling for Riddle! That's Hermione's part! Shoo Luna!

Nope, no Luna OR Hermione falling for Tom in this one. No one falls for Tom. Except Autumn.

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Edels:really good idea to have a tom/hermione which explores their dynamic outside romance.

Thank you, yes, I felt like it would be nice to explore what that would do to the fic, to not be able to solve their fights with sex. I think you'll agree that it's all becomes... fun ^^

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Aww Come on, Salazar, pick Harry. Insane Tom is fun.

Yes, but that would make a rather short story. They'd just battle each other to the death - the Serpent rises and everyone dies - The end!

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Alina:

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Gorgeous.

I'm glad you feel that way Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!

Wow Miya, your fans really have taken the 'fall' joke to another level

Yeah, Ozzy, it's strange, it's almost as if they know I've been joking about it

That's so weird.. now we know you have fans working at the NSA...

Yeah, or FRA, the Swedish version ^^

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Guest:

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Awesome! I really love this story, it's different from others I've read. As always, you leave me curious for more!

I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much! And well, this story has been stuck in my mind a long time now, so I felt like it was about time to post it. I hope I'll be able to update later today, so hopefully you'll see the new chapter then! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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delia cerrano:

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Chapters 1-6: What a unique and wonderful mind you must have to think up this story. Very different from the usual. Really like it so far even though I don't know whether Salazar and new Riddle are good or bad yet. And Luna! I think she is more knowing than Riddle thinks...I hope!! Pretty funny if they make a match of it because since he doesn't remember everything and he is back as a young more innocent(maybe)Riddle?? Maybe she can boss him around by his pkg! That would be funny.

Aww, thank you, you flatter me! Wonderful, disturbed, whatever gets the words down on paper ^^ But I'm glad you like it and I hope you'll keep liking it!
As to Salazar and Riddle... well, can't spoil things too much, but I think it's safe to say that Riddle is pretty more bad than he is good. However, that doesn't mean he and Hermione can't work together. And as for Salazar... he is the mystery now, isn't he?
Well, as much as I like Luna, this is not a story that will ship Tom and Luna. He just used her to have his way, and now he is leaving Hogwarts without her. So yeah, not much more to work with there... or is is?
Well, you'll just have to keep reading and find out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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Guest:

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Fabulous as always! I liked the end part with the snakes especially!

P.S. Hope you feel better!

Yay! Glad you liked it! Yeah, the snakes was funny to play around with ^^ You'll see more snakes in the future. And thank you, I hope I feel better soon too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest 1:

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Great work, as always!

Glad you are enjoying it! I hope I can keep up the quality! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Guest 2:

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Love it so much this is great

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest:

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Aw, I liked that quasi-sibling moment! Annoyed Tom is great.

Glad you liked it! It was fun to write them as siblings and doing sibling stuff. Especially when it annoyed Tom so much Hihihihi, thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

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Guest 1

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OMG is that who you plan to have Hermione be paired up with! hehehe!

Well, this story doesn't have any pairings, so Hermione won't be paired with anyone. However, if she has sex with someone, that's another question Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Guest 2

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Great! Gabriel sounds interesting, curious to see where he takes the story.

Glad you are liking Gabriel! He has been a fun character to write so I hope you'll keep liking him Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest:

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Hahaha I'm really liking Gabriel and Hermione

Wih! Glad you do! I really enjoyed writing Gabriel and always enjoy writing Hermione ^^ Thanks!


veenam:

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its too good! plz I like it

Yay! I'm glad you are enjoying the story!

Snarla:

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I'm so interested to see how this will turn out. Tom Riddle has finally found some other dark wizrd who can cause him trouble

We are halfway through the story now, so hopefully you'll see how it all turns out soon enough And yes, now Tom has found a new friend to play with... hehehehe. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

anon:

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very nice story!

Thanks! Glad you like it!

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Guest:

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:Great work!

Thanks you!

Guest:

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:Omg this is the best chapter so far! Things are getting exciting! Ahhh! Awesome! Can't wait for more!

Hihihi I'm glad you think the chapters are improving! I hope you'll continue to enjoy them! Hopefully you won't have to wait so long for the next one Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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mre-quecky:

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wonderful updates! great story so far

Wih! Glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Cerena:

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OMG! I am loving this story! What a twist from the usual storylines. I'm really enjoying this. Now I just have to patiently wait for more to be written.... not very patient here lol especially with such a good story!

Yay! I'm glad you are enjoying the story and find it unusual! I know myself that I can get tired of the usual fanfiction tropes and that it can be nice to read something different, so then it's happy that I can provide it as well. Haha, well, I have written all the chapters of this story, so the wait will probably not be too long. It just depends on my editing and then my beta... of course, sometimes real life come in the way of fanfiction... hopefully that won't happen before this story is completely posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest

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Haha I love Gabriel, I wonder what you'll do with him. Nice work!

Gabriel is a lot of fun to write ^^ But you'll just have to wait and see what happens to him! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest:

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Awesome! I'm loving Hermione x Gabriel!

Yay! Glad you do They are fun to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Guest2:

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sex oath? haha you are creative！though i enjoy reading hermione x gabriel relationship, i suspect dear gabriel will die very soon. i don't thk tom will leave someone knowing his secret alone, after reading all your other stories (well i use google translate to read the one in swedish )

Glad you think so! I try And I'm happy you like the Hermione/Gabriel-action! There will be more of that in coming chapters ^^ Hahah, but no, I doubt Tom will leave him alone... the question is what CAN he do? I guess we'll just have to wait and see! (Also, must be hard to read the Swedish stories since there are so many typos in them! Kudos on you for trying!) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Guest3:

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oh looks like gabriel is up to something...i wonder if he will turn out to be evil.

Everyone is always up to something! As to whether he is evil or not... we'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Guest:

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Great work! Tom and Hermione's relationship is interesting, and I'm curious to see what happens on the HermionexGabriel front.

Thank you! It's very interesting to look at Tom and Hermione from another angle, and see how that change the dynamic, so I'm glad other people enjoy it too! And you'll find out what happens between Hermione and Gabriel soon enough ^^ Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Guest2:

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I still love Tom and Hermione's interaction hehehe

Haha, that's good, because there will be more of that ^^ Even though it's only sibling-interaction! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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buttercup88:

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love the update hopefully you'll get the next one up soon as i cant wait to read happens next

I hope this is soon enough for you At least it's not a lot of updates left for you to wait for! Thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope you like it!

MrEquecky:

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wonderful updates!!,

Thank you! Here is some more coming your way in a moment

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Guest 1:

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Wow, great! I liked Hermione's note at the end, and seeing Tom's thoughts was cool & makes me wonder if I should be suspicious of Gabriel!

Glad you liked it! And yes, it was rather neat to have Hermione see Tom's thought for a change. And yes, you should be suspicious of Gabriel He is a suspicious guy!


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:If Gabriel actually turns out to be Severus Snape I won't be surprised. Thank you for the update by the way

Hahaha, wow, didn't see that one coming. Er... actually, that much is canon that Snape is dead in this story XD But that was a fun guess! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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:Great chapter!))

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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MreQuecky

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wow, awesome update, really loved it! just curious: is there a chance you will be posting this story on ao3 (archive of our own) as well? It would be much easier to follow the story and bookmark it there...

Oh, this story is posted on Ao3 already! And yes, it is easier to follow it there, so, if you haven't found it already, here is a link to all my stories on Ao3: http://archiveofourown.org/users/LadyMiya
I hope you find it alright! Thanks for reading and reviewing!