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PostSubject: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:40 pm

FFnet review on "The Assassination of Lucius Malfoy" Time turner Reversal Challenge Fic#1

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Awesome story. I assume that this is not the last chapter? I sure hope not...

Definitely one of my favorite Tomione stories of all time. Very Happy


First of all, thank you for being the first review! And what a wonderful review it is!
I just finished writing the fic and working with my beta to perfect it, today, so this is fantastic. It's the first time I received a review in a few short hours! (hahaha)

I'm considering putting up a couple of chapters on this as sequels. They would be shorter chapters, but still interesting. I even came up with chapters names! XD

So, keep an open eye, I may come back and add on to this after I finish the other two fics for the Challenge. You never know, it could become a multi-chaptered fic! XD

Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it! It made my heart swell to see that it is one of your favorite Tomiones of all time!!! I must brag to the forum about that! LOL

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Tue Jul 24, 2012 2:15 pm

Reviews for "The Assassination of Lucius Malfoy" :

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lilmisslovely24 7/17/12 . chapter 1
Quite good. It was definitely interesting, just sucks Draco had to die, haha I just love him to much

lilmisslovely24,
Sorry about the "killing off Draco" but...it was necessary to the storyline. Thank you for the review, it really means a lot to get such good feed back Smile


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Mariico 7/20/12 . chapter 1
Beeeee! It somehow looks better here than it did on gdocs...maybe it's the grey lines? Have I ever told you my favorite part is the beta appreciation?
Anyway. Go back to writing, Bee! No breaks, remember?

Mariico,
Of course your favorite part is the Beta Appreciation! I think you did a wonderful job Beta'ing, and you are gifted in the art of distraction Smile Thank you for your great work, and your continued help in distracting me while I am writing Laughing

Slytherin incerely,

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:07 am

FFnet, reviews on "Granger's Anatomy"

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shoplifterette:
What an emotional rollercoaster ride. I almost cried when Ron and Lavender
lost their baby. :-(

Neutral How did you read and review so quickly? good job I got the idea of Ron/Lav losing their baby from "Grey's Anatomy" as well, I just didn't copy the dialogue from the show because...well, I may be home all day long, but who has that time on their hands, besides, I think my dialogue was FAR better. Twisted Evil Thanks for the review, and I will be copying this message and pasting it on the tomioneconventionforum, as well. Smile


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Shoplifterette:
Wow, what a twist - Hermione killing Harry. It really surprised me. But it was
a good, dark kind of surprise. It fit well with the story, and for Hermione in
that kind of situation, there really wasn't anything else to do, she was in
too deep.

Very good story, I'll be sure to re-read this. :-)

Shoplifterette,
you are too sweet. Yes, I know it was quite a twist, but I felt that Hermione being in such a high-strung, stressed-to-the-breaking-point state would aim to kill before she even realized who she would be killing. You completely understood! Very Happy Yay. hug
Thank you for the amazingly kind words, and your wonderfully nice review! I always look forward to getting a review from you! blush




AFFnet reviews on Granger's Anatomy:

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Body of review from buttercup follows:

i love grey's anatomy.. and i so remember that episode. so i can't wait to see where you take this and is draco going to be an alex?

buttercup,
Oh, I do hate to disappoint, but I had trouble last night getting Chapter three up last night, which is, in all extents and purposes, is the ending, the Epilogue. This story was a three part Challenge Fic for the tomioneconvention forum. I don't think I will be continuing it. I did leave it open ended, in the epilogue, but I doubt that I will continue it while I have four other works on my plate. But keep reviewing and reminding me - you can even PM me on FFnet to see if I will be restarting "Granger's Anatomy" because, who knows? I may find inspiration and continue it little by little.
Thank you for the review!
Sincerely,
BrightneeBee

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Body of review from magentasouth follows:

Is it a two shot or is there more? I thoroughly enjoyed that! You have an eloquent and engaging style of writing.

magenta,
It's a three chapter-oneshot, chapter three refused to load last night, so hopefully today, it will.
Thank you for the review, and the compliment. I try really hard to keep a flow of scenery and emotion that keeps a reader just a little more enraptured with the story. Sometimes I think I fail, but other times I'm told I nailed it, so...Thank you for the kind words
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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 3:34 pm

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well....that was certainly dark, good but dark lol

kain,

Very Happy Yes, I know. It's a habit, everything turns dark in the end when I am writing. LOL. Thanks for the review! I have one more challenge fic coming, and hopefully it won't be as dark, but...well, it's me, so it probably will be.
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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:08 pm

FFnet reviews for "Granger's Anatomy"


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Nerys:
Good story. Update soon.


Dear Nerys,

You're a jerk. But a funny jerk.
Thanks for the reveiw.

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:36 pm

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FFnet reviews for "Granger's Anatomy"


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Nerys:
Good story. Update soon.


Dear Nerys,

You're a jerk. But a funny jerk.
Thanks for the reveiw.

Sincerely,
brightneeBee

Well, at least you didn't get my normal, kind reaction to review demands. Be happy, very happy. *insert sweet smile*

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:38 pm

LOL, I thought it was funny after the initial shock of ...."She left that? Did she even read it?....that bitch." wore off. rofl
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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:10 pm

AFFnet reviews on Granger's Anatomy:


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very good but i would like more..


o.O.... Crabbe & Goyle ...... Umbridge Excuse me?

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Mon Aug 06, 2012 10:14 pm

FFnet review for "Granger's Anatomy"

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Mariico:
very c00l. i lyk3 d!s. updat3 s00n.
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jk, im not that mean. xD

I was kind of imagining Voldemort popping out from Lavender lol. Me and my
corrupted mind.

When will you finally take my suggestion? Stop putting off such brilliancy.
"Hermione apparated Voldemort away, and the two of them married and had fifty
babies that would one day grow up to fight sparkling vampires." I would give
you 10/10 just for that line.

It was a cool story, though after the first chapter, I thought Hermione was
going to have to help Voldemort give birth or something.
-shouldstopspeakingmycorrupte dthoughts-

Mari,
Merlin, you scared the poo out of me with that horrid spelling! Laughing
Who thinks of this stuff but you?! o.O "I was kind of imagining Voldemort popping out from Lavender lol." <- You weirdo! XD
Well, if your suggestions weren't so fluffy!Voldemort, then maybe I will! Besides, who wants fifty babies?!! Though...fifty mini-Voldies would help to take care of the sparkly-vampire movement spreading across the seas to Britain, wouldn't it? LOL
Thanks for the review, you weird weird person!

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Tue Aug 07, 2012 9:36 pm

FanFiction.net reviews on "Paralyzed"

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From: Aj (Guest)
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Aj:I am honoured to be the firt reviewer on your story. I want moreeee! It was
amazing, truley amazing, I would love for this to be a multi-chap fic!
Like like your writing style

AJ

AJ,

Oh, thank you so much! And I am honored that you were the first reviewer on this fic, as well. It is such a sweet review! Smile Maybe one day in the future I will come back to these Challenge fics and add on to them. But until then, it will remain a oneshot, sorry.

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PostSubject: Re: Challenge Fic reviews for brightneeBee   Tue Aug 07, 2012 10:15 pm

FFnet review on "Paralyzed"

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Ha..ha...ha...I interpreted the last couple of lines in a completely MA rated
way (or M rated, can't really tell the difference in my mind.)
"this next step is quite painful..." I'm sure it is. Wink
You know, I really should've never started reading fanfiction. Look what it
has done to my brain.
You still didn't use my ending. It's fluffier though, than the one I beta'd
(it ended with them keeping his head, and then shagging, didn't it?) so you're
getting there. Next time, just add a wedding ring and some babies and you're
good.
Learn from the fluffy master.
And because you love my n00b talk: gr3at st0ry. i lyke h0w valdym0rt and h3rms
w3r3 lyke, s0 cut3 t0g3th3r. th3y sh0uld lyke, t0tally lyk3, g3t marri3d 0r
s0m3thing.

Mari,

I'm going to beating a dead horse you if you keep talking "n00b."
Unfortunately, I am not a fluffy writer, so Razz on you! lol.

Thanks for the review, and for threatening me when I tried to procrastinate! Very Happy

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